My initial inquiry question stemmed from reading about security in public spaces, reading Steven Flusty’s article “building paranoia”, as well as my own observations of my hometown and how more and more homeowners are securing their homes. When I was home for spring break, I noticed that an increasing amount of houses in my neighborhood have increased or taken visible “security” precautions for safety. In class we discussed securing public space and cameras all over cities, which I was also able to observe. There were cameras on top of many stoplights and police parked around and walking through parks. This led me to asking the question, what is the cause for people to secure their homes? I wanted to know if there was a justification for securing our homes or if we live in a culture of fear. Through my research thus far I haven’t changed my inquiry question. I’ve only come into more questions that aid in my goal of working through my inquiry question.
Coming into this topic, I did not know what my primary research would reveal. I consider this a bonus because it restricts me from typing an argumentative paper. The most surprising find was that there are gated communities for all types of economic classes in America. This definitely goes against the stereotype in America because the public considers gated communities to be for the upper class.
In my research, I found that there are many different reasons why people secure their homes, such as fear, by experience or upbringing, but at the same time found trends and patterns that hopefully will lead me to some answers. The most important component of my research has been the interviews because I was able to really talk and find out possible concerns and fears versus a short survey where all that is left are the words. Through interviewing, I was able to ask citizens more detailed questions that I will look to answer further upon completion of my secondary research. Thus far, my research seems to be lining up. I’ve been fortunate to not have any conflicting information because my inquiry question is broad so a new reason or trend for home security creates a new topic to explore. This way I can follow where my information takes me but also pose questions that come up in addition to my process of research.
I’ve had a couple of original ideas; such as it is in human nature to have a secure home. Many animals in the wild build their resting places in areas hard to get to for intruders, for instance birds building nests in high trees or animals that burrow in the earth for shelter from predators.
Thesis: While 9/11 resulted in substantial destruction of life and property its effect was an increase of public security but had limited to no effect of personal security.
April 20, 2010 at 5:56 pm |
Hi Grant. I am writing this after we spoke in my office, but I do think the thesis above is not what we discussed. This thesis makes it seem as if whole paper will be about 911, which from my understanding it won’t. I can’t remember if we came up with a thesis in my office, but if you need help, let me know. Laurie